Persuasive full script preparation outline
Persuasive Speech Outline
Voting Machines Should Not Be Used
I. INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter: Imagine yourself going to the polls and casting your vote for your favorite
politician on an electronic voting machine also known as e-voting. You get to the machine where
you’re planning to cast your vote, but it turns out that the machine you are using can get hacked
under two minutes. This leads to the following question: Why has the government not taken
action to improve or remove e-voting?
Relevance: According to Alice B. Lloyd, after Russia interfered with the 2016 election, congress
approved a $380 million budget to improve electronic voting machine systems. Yet, only
Virginia has replaced their outdated machine, leaving 13 states still dependent on electronic
devices. There are five states including who want to improve their system; but, they still can’t
afford to upgrade to paper ballots (Lloyd, 2018). Keep in mind, that in the 2016 presidential
election, approximately 138 million of eligible voters voted (Penn Library, 2018). This
demonstrates that 138 millions of people’s voice may not be heard. Voting is a right and
privilege that eligible voters are given and we need to make sure that every vote counts.
I want to persuade you to begin spreading the word about the flaws of e-voting and make your
voice be heard among your community. This will help us to achieve a better and more
sustainable future--creating and sustaining peace, justice, and stronger institutions.
Overview: Today, I am going to talk to you about the flaws of e-voting including: lack of
accuracy, possibility of error, and hacking; and I will give you some solutions you can take to
protect voters and their voice in society.
Transition: The question regarding how safe voting machines are, brings up an ethical analysis.
II. BODY
Need/Problem
Voting machines have lost votes and electronic failure.
• In Palm Beach County, Florida in March 2012, the program on a voting machine caused
votes to be assigned to the wrong candidate. Luckily, this county used paper trail which
permitted the county to go back and recount all of the correct ballots changing the result
of the election. Yet, nearly 40 percent of voters are expected to cast ballots on electronic
machines that don’t use paper trial (Clay, 2012).
• During the state of Texas primaries in 2006, a programming error in Tarrant County’s
voting machine created an additional 100,00 votes that were never casted. Hart
InterCivic, the company who created the programmed took responsibly for the error and
claimed to lower future problems. However, companies who develop this types of
program can easily set up which vote goes to which candidate (Common Cause, 2010).
• In 2018 Defcon, one of the world’s largest hacking convention held in Las Vega, Nevada,
proved how e-voting machines are vulnerable to hacking. For example, Rachel Tobac,
CEO of SocialProof Security Company, was able to hacked a voting machine used in 18
states without may tools under two minutes (Inverse, 2018).
Situations like these discourage people from voting because they start believing that their
vote does not matter because they can be easily manipulated or lost at any given time.
Transition: How can we solve this problem?
Satisfaction/Solution
We can solve this issue by raising awareness about the flaws and failures in an e-voting system
within our local community is a good way to make sure people’s voice are being heard in our
democracy. Once our representatives start noticing your protests, they will start introducing bills
which may increase the budget to buy new systems and bring back paper ballots.
The limitation for this solution is that companies need to revise their programs which
may take months to years; but, the wait is worth it.
Another solution is for the federal and state government to create regulations that help
update voting machines every five years; since the country was using ten year-old
machines during the last presidential election.
Transition: We've now discussed multiple solutions; what is the future outcome of voting
machines?
Visualization:
The 2018 Midterm Elections was the first to exceed voter turnout because over 100 million
people voted. The number of voters may increase in the next election; therefore, our government
should start improving the electronic voting machine system so we can have a fair and accurate
election that represents the voice of the people. We cannot underestimate the amount of power
voters have on their hands.
Transition: In conclusion,
III. CONCLUSION
• Summary: Voting machines lack accuracy because the program can record a candidate for
each time someone votes; meanwhile, other machines can create additional ballots that never
existed. Another flaw of using e-voting machine, is that they’re really easy to manipulate
their control setting, making a specific candidate win the election in the county.
• Action: You should feel responsible to stand up for your constitutional right to free by
starting mini campaigns throughout your community about the importance of sing paper
ballots instead of using e-voting because your voice always matters. If not, then call and
email your local representatives and inform them about the disadvantages of using voting
machines. I have included their contact information in the following slide...
• Final Sentence: Hopefully you now understand the importance of removing voting
machines. This is not only making yourself be heard, but allowing future voters to have a
voice as well.
Thank you for listening.
References
Clayton, M. (2012, 25 Oct). E-voting puts vote accuracy at risk in four key states. Christian
Science Monitor Retrieved from https://sks-sirs-com.db16.linccweb.org
Common Cause. (2010). Electronic Voting Machines Invite Tampering. In D. A. Miller (Ed.),
Current Controversies. Federal Elections. Detroit, MI: Greenhaven Press. (Reprinted
Debacle, 2008) Retrieved from from Malfunction and Malfeasance—A Report on the
Electronic Voting Machine
http://link.galegroup.com.db16.linccweb.org/apps/doc/GYZHII434494530/OVIC?u=linc
clin_mdcc&sid=OVIC&xid=cf59a404
Inverse, K. (2018, August 14). Video footage shows a voting machine used in 18 states being
hacked in less than 2 minutes. Retrieved from
https://www.businessinsider.com/votingmachine-being-hacked-at-defcon-video-2018-8
Lloyd, A. B. (2018). State Elections Systems Remain Vulnerable to Cybercriminals. In Opposing
mdcc&sid=OVIC&xid=e422c12a
Penn Library. (2018, August 24). Library Guides: Post-Election 2016 Recap & Resources: Voter
Science Monitor Retrieved from https://sks-sirs-com.db16.linccweb.org
Turnout. Retrieved from https://guides.libraries.psu.edu/post-election-2016/voter-turnout
Viewpoints Online Collection. Detroit, MI: Gale. (Reprinted from Yes, The Midterms
Will Be Hacked, The Weekly Standard, 2018, July 18) )