Hello,, I need an Analysis essay based on Lionheart movie all the information is attached too.
Bowie State University Department of Language, Literature, and Cultural Studies
English 101 Spring 2019
Due: Start of Class, March 15 (Blackboard)
Essay 2- Analysis
An author who writes analysis essays explains a central idea through examples. Good examples are used to
clarify points while helping to build a connection with readers. In formulating analysis essays, a writer either
focuses on one specific example or uses several examples in explaining the central idea.
Genre/Medium: Analysis/ Typed essay
Purpose: The writer of an analysis essay uses examples to explain a point and/or topic to the reader. For this
assignment you will write an analysis essay that follows the five-paragraph essay format on one
of the essay topics listed below.
Format: Your five-paragraph essay must contain a concrete closed (parallel, three-point) thesis statement
at the end of the first paragraph and follow the MLA guidelines. This means that your essay
should make use of topic sentences and connectors for your body paragraphs. Such formatting is the
foundation of effective communication in writing in the classroom.
Audience: This essay will target a scholarly audience. Therefore, your language and style should meet the
intellectual needs of individuals who read on a collegiate level and pique their interests.
Stance/role: What attitude and information (about yourself as a student) will you convey through the analysis
essay? Think about what you want to communicate to the reader (i.e., the professor) and convey
your stance throughout your essay. Careful wording and sentences will communicate your stance as
a serious student, someone who pays attention to details. Sloppy writing will communicate that you
are a sloppy student or person.
Use of evidence and reasoned arguments will also communicate your effort on the assignment
similarly. Therefore you need to develop your writing using evidence from the film and lay out your
analysis in a reasoned manner.
Instructions: 1. Outline and Draft a five-paragraph essay on one of the prompts below.
2. Peer review the essay with your classmates (or take it to the SVWC for tutoring help or use the
Smarthinking resource on Blackboard)
3. Revise the draft to address their feedback.
5. Submit final draft and Revision Memo.
Directions:
1. Brainstorm and outline: Before choosing your topic you should consider what you want to write about. Once
you have chosen your topic, you should decide where you stand on the issue.
2. Writing: Present your argument in a way that convinces the reader that your analysis is a valid one. Remember,
this essay should have a specific, detailed, three-point thesis statement. It should use topic sentences to anchor
each paragraph and evidenced-based exposition to layout the point.
3. Reviewing and editing: You will draft an essay for peer review. To proceed with this process, you must
initially do a review in class using the peer review sheets provided and through the Smith Vidal Literacy and
Language Center.
4. Finishing up and writing a reflection memo: You will, finally, edit your essay based on the feedback provided
by your reviewers and write-up a memo recapping your understanding of the writing process (refer to the model.)
Prompts:
1. In the film, Lionheart, when Chief Ernest Obiagu falls ill, instead of allowing his daughter,
Adaeze, to manage the company, Chief Obiagu appoints his brother, Godswill, even though he
does not have the experience managing the company that Adaeze has. The excuse given is that
Adaeze is not ready, and Godswill is there to guide her into her leadership position.
Write an essay where you analyze whether Chief Obiagu’s decision was justified (or fair).
Provide evidence from the film to support your assertions.
2. One of the major messages of the film is family and how working together helps the people
become stronger because each can play to his or her strengths. In other words, the family is a sort
of a team and people have to work together (collaborate) to get the job done.
Write an essay where you analyze the film’s underlying message that collaboration is the
key to success. Provide evidence from the film to support your assertions.
3. The film Lionheart shows a perspective of Africa that some individuals in the West rarely see,
that of a regular modern country where people are trying to live regular lives and create
successful businesses. Put another way, the story negates the skewed and anachronistic view of
an African society, Nigeria, as a poor, “developmental basket-case” waiting for the outside world
to come and save it.
Write an essay where you analyze how the film provides a positive portrayal of an African
nation. Provide evidence from the film to support your assertions.
A B C D F
Thesis 10-9 points 8 7 6 0
The essay has a clear thesis
statement that is exceptionally
appropriate for the topic,
and/or contains three parallel
points that address the prompt
and logically connect with the
paragraphs presented in the
essay through analysis.
The essay has a clear thesis
statement that is appropriate for
the topic and contains three
parallel points that address the
prompt and logically connect
with the paragraphs presented in
the essay
The essay has a thesis statement
that contains three points that
address the prompt and somewhat
connect with the paragraphs
presented in the essay.
The essay contains a thesis
statement that contains two or
three points that may not fully
address the prompt and may not
connect with the paragraphs
presented in the essay.
The essay does not
reveal any
identifiable thesis
statement; or no
assignment
submitted.
Organization 10-9 points 8 7 6 0
The essay is well organized.
Paragraphs are coherent and
unified. Each supporting
paragraph begins with a topic
sentence and covers a single
topic that connects to the
thesis and topic sentence with
effective details and examples
or supportive ideas. Each
paragraph contains effective
transitions that control the
flow of the essay.
The essay is well organized. The
majority of the paragraphs
display coherence and unity. The
supporting paragraphs begin
with a topic sentence and cover a
single topic that connects to the
thesis and the topic sentence
with details and examples or
supportive ideas. Each paragraph
contains transitions that aid in
the flow of the essay.
The essay is organized. The
paragraphs are somewhat coherent
or unified. The supporting
paragraphs contain a central idea,
but sometimes may be ineffective
at covering a single topic that
connects the thesis. Details and
examples or supportive ideas may
be lacking. Some paragraphs may
contain transitions that aid in the
flow of the essay.
The essay is disorganized. The
paragraphs are incoherent and lack
unity. The supporting paragraphs
are ineffective at covering a single
topic or idea that connects with the
thesis sentence. Details and
examples or supportive ideas are
not fully developed. The
paragraphs lack effective
transitions between ideas and the
flow of the essay needs
improvement.
The essay's
organization is
incoherent; or no
assignment
submitted.
Content of
Essay
20-18 points 17-15 14-13 12-11 0
The essay’s content is
superior; it efficiently
addresses the prompt, the
topic, and the requirements of
the assignment. Its analysis is
superior and original, and uses
excellent evidence to make its
points.
The essay’s content is
appropriate and adequately
addresses the prompt, the topic,
and requirements of the
assignment. Its analysis is
competent, and uses solid
evidence to make its points.
The essay’s content is somewhat
appropriate and somewhat
addresses the prompt, the topic,
and requirements of the
assignment. Its analysis is also
adequate.
The essay’s content is inadequate
and does not fully address the
prompt, the topic, or requirements
of the assignment. Its analysis is
also inadequate.
The essay’s content
is off topic; or no
assignment
submitted.
Logic &
Reasoning
15-13 points 12-10 9-8 7-6 0
The essay is sophisticated; it
promotes critical thinking,
displays sound logic and
reasoning, and dispels
rudimentary or simplistic
ideas. Examples fully support
the thesis and it is evident the
topic is thoroughly researched.
The essay mostly promotes
critical thinking; ideas are
logical, appropriate and
reasoned. Examples support the
thesis and the topic shows
evidence of some research.
The ideas presented in the essay
are somewhat logical. The
reasoning may be sound, but lacks
smoothness. Examples somewhat
support the thesis.
The ideas are illogical and/or are
not fully developed. The essay
displays rudimentary or simplistic
ideas. Examples do not support the
thesis or need more specific
development.
The ideas
incoherent; or no
assignment
submitted.
10-9 points 8 7 6 0
Expression/
Style
Sentence structure and diction
are clear and appropriate for
the intended audience.
Subordination and
coordination are presented to
create a sophisticated
rhetorical style. Words are
exceptionally appropriate and
well chosen.
Sentence structure and diction
are clear and address an
appropriate audience.
Subordination and coordination
are presented to create an
appropriate rhetorical style.
Words are appropriate.
Sentence structure and diction are
somewhat clear and address an
audience. Some subordination and
coordination may be lacking.
Words are somewhat appropriate.
Sentence structure and diction are
not clear and do not fully address
an intended audience.
Subordination or coordination is
not used to present a rhetorical
style.
Sentence structure
is incoherent; or no
assignment
submitted.
Mechanics 15-13 points 12-10 9-8 7-6 0
The essay demonstrates
mastery in grammar and
mechanics. The essay does not
contain spelling, punctuation,
or typographical errors.
Agreement errors, wordiness,
passive voice, pronoun
reference errors, and
ambiguous modifiers are not
present or these errors do not
impede meaning or overly
distract the reader.
The essay demonstrates control
over grammar and mechanics.
The essay does not contain
major spelling, punctuation, or
typographical errors. A few
agreement errors, wordiness,
passive voice, pronoun reference
errors, or ambiguous modifiers
are present, but they do not
impede meaning or distract the
reader.
The essay demonstrates some
control over grammar and
mechanics. The essay contains few
spelling, punctuation, or
typographical errors. Some
agreement errors, wordiness,
passive voice, pronoun reference
errors, or ambiguous modifiers are
present, but these errors do not
impede meaning or distract the
reader.
The essay displays a lack of
control over grammar and
mechanics. The essay contains
spelling, punctuation, or
typographical errors. Agreement
errors, wordiness, passive voice,
pronoun reference errors, or
ambiguous modifiers are present
and these errors slightly impede
meaning or distract the reader.
The essay is
grammatically
incoherent; or no
assignment
submitted.
Revision
Memos
20-18 points 17-15 14-13 12-11 0
The memo clearly lists the
changes made on the basis of
reviewer’s feedback. It lists
why the changes were made
and reflects on the process. It
also articulates how future
work will build-off what was
learned.
The memo lists the changes
made. It lists why the changes
were made and reflects on the
process.
The memo lists the chances made. Does not list any changes or
reflections.
No memo