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ELI 210 Essay #2 Outline

I. Introduction (What is the problem?)

Thesis for summary: _With the rapid development of China, people all focus on making money, ignore the environment they living with. Nowadays the air pollution becomes more and more severe in China.___________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

II. Body Paragraph 1 (Why is this topic important? Why should we care?)

Topic Sentence: _The air pollution, as known as smog, can cause deadly disease such as lung cancer to people. If we ignore the air pollution, we are ignoring our health. ______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

III. Body Paragraph 2 (Solution #1)

Topic Sentence: __There are almost 200 million cars in China, which will exhaust huge amount of emissions every day. People should use more public transportation._____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

IV. Body Paragraph 3 (Solution #2)

Topic Sentence: _Citizens should be restricted to buy gasoline cars. And government should encourage people to buy electronic cars.______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

V. Body Paragraph 4 (Solution #3)

Topic Sentence: ___Move the factories which will exhaust toxic emissions outside of the city.____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________

VI. Conclusion (Restate problem and solutions)

Closing Sentence: In a word, solve the air pollution will take long period of time and request all the individuals to make attributions. Taking care of the air pollution is taking care our own health.______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________