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Ali Yassin

English 101

Date: 16 April 2018

I want you to work on the introduction and closing I have made 3 points of the oversimplification of the story (the stolen party) but I just miss the introduction and the closing for this essay. And please followed the attachment instructor requirements and apply to the introduction and I add the one of example of essay of my friend but he has different subject of the story so introduction should have stared with question and followed the step by step as it’s written in instructor paper with 7 steps in picture and closing should discuss about the lesson from the story with followed with 4 steps of the paper instructor

Introduction: should started with question for example: have you ever heard about someone thought that his / her relationship and introduce the (hook reader ) and followed the 7 steps of the requirement.

Point 1: Oversimplification complicates reality. Rosaura oversimplified the relationship between her and Luciana. She used to go to Luciana's house and they would both finish their homework while Rosaura's mother was cleaning. The two girls have their tea in the kitchen and shared secrets with each other (Heker 316). So Rosaura simply thought that Luciana as her best friends, and she never thought about the problem of being friends with rich people. Complication arises when mother tried to prevent her from being hurt by pointing out the impossibility of a real relationship between poor and rich, Rosaura was deeply offended. She said in her naive way, “I am going because I've been invited. And I've been invited because Luciana is my friend. So there.” (Heker 315). She thought her mother was wrong. Eventually, she went to the party and enjoyed the moment till the event complicated when the girl with bow openly revealed to her that Lucania couldn`t be her friend because she has never confirmed that`s as Luciana`s cousin.

“Oversimplification on the stolen party”.

Point 2 Rosaura oversimplified her role at party as she didn`t consider herself as “the maid`s daughter, but as a guest.” Because she felt uniquely special to be chosen to serve drinks and pass out cakes, Senora Ines led Rosaura on by letting her participate in the game and activities (Heker 317) .When the magician picked her out of the crowd to assist him in his magic trick. She was fantastic and very brave. However, the reality that Senora Ines was asking her as a maid. This is obvious because even though she was invited as a guest to the party, she was really there for help. This was shown when Senora Ines gave Rosaura money instead of toys at the end of the party.

point 3 As much as Rosaura thought she was guest, Senora Ines thought knew that she wasn`t. Senora Ines oversimplified and assumed that Rosaura knew she was hired at party. The story promotes a perfect acknowledgment about how those in the employer always oversimplify the positions of servants .Senora Ines gave special duties to Rosaura allowing her into the kitchen .Her excuse was “You yes, but not the others, they`re much too boisterous” (Heker 316). This made Rosaura missed interpreted that she is special and it gave her the impression that Senora Ines trusts her however; she was not prepared for what occurred at the end of the party. Rosaura waited anxiously for her little gift, but instead Senora Ines hands her two bills. Rosaura`s pride was destroyed. She came to party as guest however, the reality that she was used as part of help. Her view toward rich people, especially Senora Ines. Rosaura`s eyes had a cold ,clear look that fixed itself on Senora Ines face .She feels less important now, and not special at all. Senora Ines, someone whom she loved and respected, made her feel like a servant instead of a friend. After that incident Rosaura didn`t feel that great about herself or about Senora Ines. She realized that she could not cross that perfectly drawn line.

Closing: or conclusion: followed the 4 steps of the requirement.