REFLECTIVE GENERAL

135270 by Aravind Reddy Enapala

Submission dat e : 15- Apr- 2019 10:23PM (UT C+1000) Submission ID: 11128084 69 File name : 11665_Aravind_Reddy_Enapala_13527 0_162182_661096558.do cx (4 38.33K) Word count : 204 6 Charact e r count : 14 034

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135270 ORIGINALITY REPORT

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Submitted to Australian Catholic University St udent Paper

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FINAL GRADE

14/25 135270 GRADEMARK REPORT

GENERAL COMMENTS

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Overall grade pass

I can see yo u have made a legitimate attempt to address what is required in this assessment. Ho wever, there are a co uple o f majo r areas which are limiting yo ur results. Yo ur written English includes a number o f grammatical erro rs which are impacting o n the f lo w o f yo ur written wo rk. Please no te the co mments and highlights I have made in yo ur paper. Additio nally, what yo u have written abo ut is no t clearly linked o r co nnected to the co ncepts o f perf o rmance, culture, etc. I can see po tential in yo ur paper. Please make a time to see me and go thro ugh yo ur paper so I can assist yo ur achievement.

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OVERALL ST RUCT URE 5 MARKS

The introduction clearly states the aims and structure;the conclusion is a solid summary and Harvard Referencing is used correctly.

GRADING FORM: ASSESSMENT 1- MBA 4 01- REPORT

ARAVIND REDDY ENAPALA 13.50

3.5

PERFORMANCE INIT IAT IVES 5 MAR

The initiaves and measures are not only connected and well worded but also supported by research

CULT URE INIT IAT IVES 5 MARKS

The initiatives and types of culture are not only accurate and expertly worded but also supported by research.

ENGAGEMENT INIT IAT IVES 5 MARKS

There is no doubt by the way the initiatives and evidence are presented that these would be a success.

RECOMMENDAT IONS 5 MARKS

Recommendations are articulately and compellingly worded and are justified by references to theory

2.5

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2.5