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12061117 Think Big (2).docx by Nagajyothi Muddhudi
Submission dat e : 06- May- 2019 04 :10PM (UT C+1000) Submission ID: 112557 0582 File name : 617 91_Nagajyo thi_Muddhudi_12061117 _T hink_Big__2__881854 _11880997 4 2.do cx (21.4 9K) Word count : 17 11 Charact e r count : 87 28
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12061117 Think Big (2).docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
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FINAL GRADE
50/100 12061117 Think Big (2).docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Hi Nagajyo thi,
Co ngrats o n submitting yo ur assessment bef o re the deadline. Yo u have written all key sectio ns o f this repo rt. Ho wever, the pro blem and the idea yo u have highlighted is no t very interesting and no vel. Also , yo u may need to pro vide much backgro und inf o rmatio n to identif y the pro blem.
T he idea and the benef its generated f ro m idea are no t clear and persuasive. Mo reo ver, yo ur idea Business mo del canvas co uld be better explained keeping in view the nine building blo cks. Similarly, the critical success f acto rs and risks co uld be better elabo rate using so me academic literature. T he f easibility analysis is go o d ho wever yo u have no t discussed it pro perly in the repo rt. I wo uld stro ngly suggest yo u see the detailed co mments within repo rt. So , yo u can co nsider this f eedback in yo ur next assessment.
Overall, this is go o d idea to attempt yo ur assessment within due time. It means yo u are o n right track. T here are high chances o f yo ur success in the next assessment if yo u co uld better develo p this idea.
Best wishes
Aman
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What is this?
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Where is T o C?
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Where is ES?
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Go o d ef f o rts
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Yo u need to pro vide details related to this techno lo gy.
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Ho w inno vative it is?
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It is very subjective.
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T his is very generic inf o rmatio n.
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No pro per ref erence given.
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Where are nine building blo cks o f business mo del canvas?
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Yo u have no t co vered all building blo cks here.
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Yo u have no t interrelated all building blo cks here.
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Go o d po ints.
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Fo rmatting issues.
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Ho w it is critical success f acto r?
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Yo u have no t discussed risks pro perly.
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Where is f easibility analysis sheet? I have asked yo u to attach it in the appendix.
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Where have yo u attached BMC?
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GRADING FORM: MGMT 2014 3: ASSESSMENT 2: BM
NAGAJYOTHI MUDDHUDI 50
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PROBLEM IDENT IFICAT ION
Effectively explaining the customer/market problem that needs solving and/or the reason the innovation is required. Marks: 15%
BENEFIT S GENERAT ED
Persuasive argument of the customer/client benefits to be generated by the idea. Marks: 10%
PROPOSED BUSINESS MODEL (BM)
Discussion of the nine building blocks in the proposed business model. Marks: 15%
BM INT ERRELAT IONSHIPS
Identification and discussion of the key interrelationships in the BM that will support success of the idea. Marks: 10%
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A very general explanation of the entrepreneurial problem that needs solving and/or the reason the innovation is required.
Rudimentary argument of the benefits to be generated by the idea.
Rudimentary explanation and discussion of the nine building blocks in the proposed business model.
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CRIT ICAL SUCCESS FACT ORS
Identification and discussion of the critical success factors to be managed during the execution of the idea. Marks: 15%
RISKS, PROBLEMS & ASSUMPT IONS
Identification of critical risks, problems, and assumptions. Marks: 10%
FEASIBILIT Y
Evaluation of overall feasibility of the idea Marks: 15%
QUALIT Y OF ASSIGNMENT
Quality of writing, grammar, minimum 6 peer-reviewed journals, APA referencing, follows business report format. Marks: 10%
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Basic explanation and discussion of the key interrelationships in the BM that will support success of the idea
Rudimentary identification and basic discussion of the critical success factors to be managed during execution of the idea.
Poor or limited identification and discussion of the critical risks and assumptions.
Very limited evaluation of the feasibility of the idea. Significantly underwhelming.
5 Submission covers the assessment tasks, general endeavour to follow business report format, perhaps some spelling and grammatical mistakes, and APA referencing generally correct.
- 12061117 Think Big (2).docx
- by Nagajyothi Muddhudi
- 12061117 Think Big (2).docx
- ORIGINALITY REPORT
- MATCH ALL SOURCES (ONLY SELECTED SOURCE PRINTED)
- 12061117 Think Big (2).docx
- GRADEMARK REPORT
- FINAL GRADE
- GENERAL COMMENTS
- Instructor
- NAGAJYOTHI MUDDHUDI50