essay body paragraphs

There are the 11 questions! Just pick like at least 4 question! And two paragraphs for each question! ( make sure have the topic sentences (3-5 sentences), support(quote from the interview and also can got from internet if it’s not enough) and Commentary.

1.What are three words you would use to describe the feeling of being safe in Hayward?

2.What song encapsulates living in Hayward? Why did you pick this song?

3.How safe do you feel walking alone in your neighborhood? Why? What about driving or taking public transit? What about shopping?

4.Compared to Hayward as a whole, does your neighborhood feel more or less safe? Why?

5.When you have felt unsafe, have you ever reached out to someone from a Hayward government for help, like police, fire, code enforcement, or a school principal? If so, what was the topic(s)? If not, why not?

6.Most of the time, we think of safety as relating to violence. What other factors in your life make you feel unsafe or fearful? Examples could include housing, food, employment, healthcare, climate, racism, or isolation.

7.We want every community member in Hayward to feel safe in their community. As we discuss and work on these issues, what strategies can we use for everyone to feel safe and fully participate?

8.Do you think policing is done safely in Hayward? Why or why not?

9.When you envision a Hayward where everyone feels safe, what does it look like? In your vision, what role does law enforcement play?

10.When you think about safety broadly, what solutions should we prioritize first?

11. Is there anything else you would like to add?

here are 3 of the questions that we can practice on 

1. Do you think policing is done safely in Hayward?  Why or why not?

2. When you envision a Hayward where everyone feels safe, what does it look like? In your vision, what role does law enforcement play?

3. When you think about safety broadly, what solutions should we prioritize first?

you need to start a para off by taking a question and turning it into a statement... 

for example ..for the first question above you could turn it into a statement like: 

​Many people think that policing is not done safely because.....(and here you insert your concept-- a concept that you probably got from the interviewees)

or you can do 

Many people think that policing IS  done safely because.....(and here you insert your concept-- a concept that you probably got from the interviewees)

for the 2nd question : 

One way that we can envision Hayward as a place where every one feels safe is......(and here you insert your concept-- a concept that you probably got from the interviewees)

for the 3rd question:

When we think about safety in Hayward, one of solutions that should be prioritized is....(and here you insert your concept-- a concept that you probably got from the interviewees)​

do you see how simple it is ... ? you take the question and turn it into a statement... THEN, you insert what ever concept you are working with for THAT paragraph... and you talk about the concept for 3-4-5 sentences.... THEN you bring in a quote... 

of course, the key here is that you need to HAVE concepts, lol.. . 

for EACH question, you are going to do 2 or 3 paragraphs.... bc you will have 2 or 3 concepts that you are working with.... so, you will make these statements 2-3 times. for the 2nd one you might say, 

When we think about safety in Hayward, ANOTHER solution that should be prioritized is....