Order # 10329

I’m so sorry to bother you again. But could you revise one more time? I find that there’s only one quote in the paper. I need several, maybe 4-5 details and each comes with its analysis. And the analysis don’t need to be that long, only 5-6 sentences is good. I want the analysis of each detail, how the detail create meaning and how they influence the article, not the analysis of the entire article. Thank you so much for your work.

Shadow of a Nation.

Analysis;

The author of the article tries to give an outline of how young people go through life to become who they are. Using that as a basis, he was able to show to the outside world what the ordinary people are going through and also what they are going through as a result of stigmatization in the society. The stigmatization left those affected on the verge of dying due to many dangers that faced them such as dangerous diseases and also violence against them which mostly led to death. It provides the readers with a rhetorical scenario where a reader must work out on the above characteristics of the society to get the real meaning. The writer also highlighted the importance of the neglected part of the nation by showing how they were hardworking if given a chance. Rhetorically, that means that every person in the society is important according to the contributions that he or she makes.

Quote;

The meaning of the article is well developed from some of the quotes found in it. The quote “Trying to go from a world where it's disrespectful to look someone in the eye into one where it' disrespectful not to. Sitting alone in his dorm room for days….” (Smith, and Smith 1) Tries to give an insight of what is happening in the society through using one of the character's situations of life. Stigmatization in the society occurs in many ways which might leave someone with only one option. That option will be to find the place and the people who are okay with him or her and supports how he or she views life. If a person is in such a situation, he should be able to know that something is wrong and something has to get done before it’s too late to do anything. The quote above belongs to the thematic part of the article. Other than evoking emotions in a person who is reading the text, the quote touches more on the larger part of the article hence it better suits there.

Surface meaning;

The surface meaning as said above, involves the evils happening in the society. That is evident from the way the writer gives the narration of what the characters went through. Most of them ended up in involving themselves with activities that could end their lives. That was from the hopelessness that befell them after trying to fit in the society that could no longer contain or accept them. Were it not for the evils; many people could not be dying. Also, if there was inclusion of everyone in the society, spread of diseases such as cirrhosis that was killing people would have stopped. Living in the part of the nation described by the writer was survival of the fittest.

The outcasts in the society are used to perform tests for new launched techniques. The part of the community that considers itself as more important will use that trick to lure the other. Though they will feel more important, the motive of the facilitators is protecting their population from the repercussions that might that may arise rather than accepting them. From the way that is framed, it’s hard to note it without the help of good observation. That is from the fact that the society will try as much to cover it and make sure that no one can notice it openly or have evidence to prove it. Despite the above being a fractional meaning, it’s hard to tell which makes it better to look for the deeper meaning.

Deeper meaning;

Right from the title, the article outlines it’s deeper meaning there. A person can figure the rhetoric nature of the text right from the beginning. A shadow is an outline of the real thing which is not that easy to see. In the real world, people only see the positive side of the nation or the society. That is from their inability to do a precise survey of how the situation is with the larger part of the population rather than the renown or the big names. From the fractional meaning explained above, the deeper meaning is quite evident and open to anyone of sound mind. A part of the nation sees itself as more important than the other, but they also depend on the other part for their survival. However, they always take advantage, benefit themselves alone and then leave the others to die and diminish.

From the quote, looking someone in the eye helps one to know if he or she is lying. It will be easier to understand when you are being lied and also to devise the next step to take. That explains the deeper meaning of the text. In a world of whites and blacks, whites always try to outshine the blacks in many ways. They do that through imposing regulations to cover up for the lies that they have already put in place. They control them, and for them not to hit back, restrictions are added to the regulations. You cannot talk to them for you to correct them or tell them what to do. Due to lack of avenues and better ways of expression, it’s hard for the stigmatized to talk point out the wrongs. The shadow is availed here where that part is not touched or talked about by anyone. Also, to address such issues openly will pause a danger to the writer which made him use rhetoric for it to be easy to present them.

Work Cited;

Smith, Gary, and Gary Smith. "The Crows Now Seek Glory—But Often Find Tragedy—In Basketball". SI.Com, 2018, https://www.si.com/vault/1991/02/18/123632/shadow-of-a- nation- the-crows-once-proud-warriors-now-seek-glory----but-often-find-tragedy----in- basketball.