World Music (Grammar)

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In the video “gal a bubble” by Konshens, the women are dressed in attire to shows or expose their sexy bodies in order to attract man. Their dressing code is by their role of marketing the video or, in other words, they are clothed in nearly half-naked fashion. This is to enable the continuous attraction of the videos to more male viewers who are naturally attracted to the women curved figured. The video imagery illustrates women are dancing in a way that achieves sexual arousal for viewers, fellow dancers and the artist himself.

The women are seen to dance naked while washing the male vehicles which displays their overdependence on the men. The camera imagery is mostly focused on the women body parts and displays the women dancing in explicitly sexually seductive manners while wearing very small shorts. The artist advises the girls to show their talent in which he means that the striping capabilities is a core talent that women should be interested in exercising. It is evident that the artist sees women as just objects that are in existence for the sole purpose to please men by exposing their bodies in pornographic style.

The camera crew is interested in the viewing of the women striping, and this degrades the contrasting feminine qualities that are supposed to place women as intellectual beings with their principles, dreams, creativity, and ambition. The women are portrayed by the video as people who are always thinking about sexual arousals and always ready for parting hard in the quest to please men sexually.

The video uses a lot of women in comparison to the number of men present in the video which describes the fact that the women are in competition for the men in a great deal of desperation for materialistic favors such as money from the men. The use of women in the videos is this modern world is also for the purpose of ensuring that the videos can attract as many viewers as possible and to ensure that they achieve maximum sales. These video influences the cultural values of the society in a negative fashion as the women are seen as just sexual figures that do not deserve respectful treatment but instead deserve to be treated as individuals who are completely dependable and always available to pleasure men regardless of how violent they are treated.

Women are therefore depicted as figures that add on the taste and marketability of the men’s videos as the more women that appear in the video and the more sexual exposure of the women bodies is used in the video, the more the video is most likely to achieve maximum sales. These views on women have led to the eventual increase in cases of sexual harassments such as violent raping as witnessed in the America. This is because the society now sees women as people who should not have their attitudes, property and independent but as people who should always be focused on satisfying the men at the expense of their intellectual abilities to making better decisions that would keep them from being exploited and so as to preserve their societal respect and be able to achieve respectable goals such as in academic excellence and technological innovation among other achievements.

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