Week 7 assignment revise on final Worktheme by looking at the feedback.

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NO, it is the same assignment from week7 that you did on the final project worktheme...she wants me to look at the feedback that I sent you to add to it....is the same just look at the week 7 assignment you did for me the final project. it was 250point and she give me only 115 saying that I need to look at the feedback she sent me after grading it and add all those points to it.that all the home is below but you are only doing the final worktheme revision...when doing it you have to look at her feedback that I sent you earlier to just add what she said missing.it due tomorrow. waiting to pay a little more.

 

application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document iconfinal_worktheme_done_revision_1.docx  just this you are re doing or adding to it from the feedback
 

 
2016-12-18 08:59
12/06/2016

Homework week 7    THIS IS THE ASSIGNMENT THAT YOU DID TWO WEEKS AGO THAT IS ONE WE ARE READ DOING BUT JUST THE FINAL WORKTHEME PART OF IT AND YOU ARE NOT DOING THE HOLD ASSIGNMENT OVER YOU JUST ADDING WHAT THE FEEDBACK IS TALKING ABOUT. I ALREADY ATTACH THE FEEDBACk BUT I'M ATTACHMENT IT AGAIN

 

 

14.85 (5.94%)

Comprehensively identifies both works, including the artist, title, date, medium, dimensions, cultural origin or period of creation, and current collection

Feedback:

Be sure to fully identify each image.

 

 

10.89 (4.36%)

Discusses the main argument/thesis statement about the relationship between selected works and the chosen social or cultural issue, but discussion is cursory or illogical

Feedback:

Although you have made progress in choosing a work that is better suited to the comparison, your main argument needs to be further developed and clarified.

 

 

8.17 (3.27%)

Explains the similarities and differences present in the formal characteristics of the two works, but explanation is cursory, or there are gaps in referencing specific aspects of each work

Feedback:

Be sure to use visual analysis and vocabulary you have learned to develop this section.

 

8.17 (3.27%)

Determines how each respective culture’s traditions and ideologies influenced the chosen works, but determination is cursory or illogical, or does not use examples to support response

Feedback:

How have the each culture's traditions and ideologies influenced the works of art? Be sure to develop with specific detals

 

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8.17 (3.27%)

Explains how each work represents its particular social, historical, and cultural climate, but explanation is cursory or illogical, or does not use examples to support response

Feedback:

Again, be sure you are incorporating sufficient detail.

 

 

10.89 (4.36%)

Explains how each of the two works reflects the social or cultural identity of its day, but explanation is cursory or illogical, or examples provided are not relevant

Feedback:

How do these works relate to the social and cultural identity of their day? Be sure to fully address this section of the rubric.

 

10.89 (4.36%)

Explains the influence the two selected works have had in the shaping of social or cultural identities, but explanation is cursory or illogical

Feedback:

Here, be sure you are developing more detail in your explanation of how these works of art helped shape social and cultural identities

 

THIS IS THE FEEDBACK MY TEACHER SENT ME AFTER GRADING THE ASSIGNMENT.

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Does not explain the influence the two selected works have had on a modern or contemporary expression of the identified shared theme

Feedback:

How have these works influenced modern art? Be sure to include specifics.

 

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Does not explain how the shared historical themes and settings tie the two previously selected works to the third piece from popular culture

Feedback:

What third work will you be comparing?

 

 

 

 

 

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Does not discuss how the theme is still relevant today

Feedback:

How is this theme still relevant today?

 

 

10.89 (4.36%)

Explains the value of challenging perceived notions of historical, cultural, and social identity and how the humanities, as a discipline, further understanding of that value, but explanation is cursory or illogical, or there are gaps in justification

Feedback:

Be sure to complete your conclusion with these elements

 

 10.89 (4.36%)

Explains how understanding social and cultural practices of the past impacts how individuals conduct themselves socially and professionally in the present, and how humanities, as a discipline, further that understanding, but explanation is cursory or illogical, or there are gaps in justification

Feedback:

Be sure to complete your conclusion with these above elements.

 

10.89 (4.36%)

Explains the responsibility of the artist to society and how the humanities, as a discipline, help in understanding that responsibility, but explanation is cursory or illogical, or there are gaps in justification

Feedback:

Be sure to address the final aspects of the paper in your response.

 

 

10.54 (4.22%)

Submission has no major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization

Feedback:

Fully cite and proof for errors. Citations not properly formatted.

 

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