Upper level writing course. Need revision on this paper.
Paper is attached below.
I'm looking for someone to revise the paper below and make changes.
It needs to be more structured and less repetitive.
Example of a structure:
Origins
Sales/Market Shares
Why so good back then
Failure, why?
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