Upper level writing course. Need revision on this paper.

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Paper is attached below. 

I'm looking for someone to revise the paper below and make changes. 

It needs to be more structured and less repetitive. 

 

Example of a structure: 

Origins
Sales/Market Shares

Why so good back then
Failure, why?

 

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