technology topic paper (writing) revision (finalize) from 4 pages to 5 1/2 pages

Hi,

  i have a draft of my paper about technology need to be finalized.

  It has 3 1/2 pages to 4 pages now, and need to be finalized to 5-6 pages. it is about technology.

  i am a freshmen and international student, so no fancy words needed. just make it general.

  i need it tmr afternoon.

  if i want to make the deal with you, i will send you my draft by email.

thx