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topicThe contemporary belief that work life and family life are separate spheres emerged with the Industrial Revolution. With this shift came the expectation that family life was women’s domain and work life was men’s domain. Lingering notions of separate spheres continue to shape men’s and women’s experiences today. Provide four examples of how this notion shapes (or could shape) men’s and women’s lives differently

Sociology (SOCI 201) 

Introductory Sociology 

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