rewite an essay (RA)

Rewrite your essay on why you choose ZZ university

This time make it as good as possible. Check spelling and punctuation.

3 pages &resources 

12 hours do 

no acadimic words , cuz im international student 

(  my name is RA. Im a master student in ZZ university and my curent major is MPPA. I came to united states specially california to complete my career scholastic. Before  i decid in which country I'm going  i started a lot of my friends about their knowledge of that and most of them voited to me  that u.s. the best place for studying from all others sides , so this why i have been selected the united state . after i got my english language on the u.s. i was pulled around a lot of choices of where can i study . i hearded about zz university frm my friends. 

now im on the first semester for me i feel so proud and serenely because im between a lot of professional professor my goal is to get a perfect education . also, to learn a new culture and a live strategy to help us bulding out selfs)