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You do need to provide more textual evidence to support your statements. I provided a couple references, but those were to get you started. You should provide examples of other districts, perhaps similar to Voorhesville in demongraghics, and what they have done. Using the school's databases will be useful in filling in these gaps. Please note that your references are not consistently APA format. Thank you.