Research Presentation

i have home work need to fix the teacher who did the homework do not respond me and the work was wrong.

i received comments from my professor to fix the work and the comment is  :

I just opened your Research Presentation and I am afraid that it does not follow the guidelines of the rubric sufficiently to pass. There is time for you to redo the Presentation before final grades are due, so my plan is to give you chance to complete it.

I will give you until May 14 ,to redo your research presentation. There are many examples of presentation formats on the Discussion Board. Most of them follow the plan of the rubric sufficiently. In psychology writing in the U.S. it is required to follow APA style. APA style is a particular approach to writing up literature reviews and original reports of empirical research. It depends on laying out the plan first, then showing the evidence, then analyzing what it may mean, all within the scientific perspective. Your research presentation does not do this effectively.

i attached the work that i done and my professor do not like it 

My topic is: what are The Effects of Violent Video Games on Children?

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·       Needed 40 slide

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