please respond to my classmate 100-150 words ( its not an essay)

Guided Response Criteria 

*Be constructive when providing feedback (The questions were well written!)

Offer a reflection of your peer’s literacy bag from the perspective of a family member who used it with their child

Describe what the strengths are about their bag for addressing the concept of literacy development.

Is there anything you would do differently?

Suggest one way that the peer can supplement their bag by including an activity for the non-English speaking child and family.

Please use the question about for writting feedback for my peer work below ( the answer to the question have to be in your feedback)

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