Please check the Desciption

Paragraph question- In what ways did the conditions created by modernity influence the social, political, cultural, economic changes occurring in society? How was this reflected in modernist film?

Your simple tasks-

1. Simplify words and sentences, break down sentences and give them a meaning if it doesn't have a proper meaning or if it is too big.

2. My Introduction and conclusion don't follow the whole paragraph properly. You just have to fix the introduction once you complete the whole paragraph problem fixing. And the conclusion if necessary.

The introduction will have 3 parts- Introductory 2 sentences about modernism maybe, then THESIS STATEMENT and then OUTLINE which tells what's going to be showed in the whole paragraph maintaining a serial.

3. Please check how the question was answered through the paragraph when you read through it, I want the old one to be answered in the same pattern. Even you can use one of the arguments of a film from here ion the old paragraph and the other architecture one by yourself.  this whole paragraph is about Modernism age, which is 1800-1960s time, not today.

 Note- Both paragraphs are about Modernism age, which is 1800-1960s time, not now.