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I WAS TRYING TO DESCRIBE MY HOUSE, AS MY FAVORITE PLACE, I NEED SOMEONE TO REVIEW IT AND MAKE IT BETTER, I HAVE ATTACHED MY DESCRIPTION, I NEED MORE DETAILS, YOU CAN MAKE THEM UP IF YOU WANT.
-Assignment:
Every "love it or leave it" must have a strong topic sentence, several supporting sentences, and a concluding sentence which reminds the reader of your main idea.
Remember, your topic sentence should present the specific place as well as the feeling/emotion being there creates within you.
Also, be sure that your "love it or leave it" has 3 parts:
1. A very specific place as its primary focus
2. Several specific sensory details that creates an exact image of your place for the reader.
3. A clear indication of how the place makes you feel, which is also the mood of the PARAGRAPH.
Remember: U need to take us to the place and help us feel what you do.
Remember, your topic sentence should present the specific place as well as the feeling/emotion being there creates within you.
Also, be sure that your "love it or leave it" has 3 parts:
1. A very specific place as its primary focus
2. Several specific sensory details that creates an exact image of your place for the reader.
3. A clear indication of how the place makes you feel, which is also the mood of the PARAGRAPH.
Remember: U need to take us to the place and help us feel what you do.
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