Only for Yhtomit

i am attaching draft 1 what u did...and draft 2 also and here is the prof comments also

This is not the same essay (with a few modifications) that you used for your Draft 1 submission. The sources are not the same, nor is the good prose the same. I don't know why you wrote a new essay when you already had a perfectly good draft to work with, but the outcome of this class is that you engage in the writing process, which includes working with material to improve it. That is why I have the stated expectation that you use the same sources for both your Exploratory and Researched Position essays, and I expect to see similar paragraphs and reworked introductions and conclusions to reflect the different types of essays. The work you have submitted, with different essays with different sources for different drafts indicates that either you started over, research and all, or that you obtained this essay from another source and submitted it as your own.