for njosh only

Based on the feedback you received in Week Three during the peer-review process, as well as the feedback you received from your instructor and your classmates throughout the course, address the following in your post:

• Describe the main areas of your paper that you need to work on as well as areas that your reviewers felt you did well on.
• How will/did you remedy any areas of weakness in your paper?
• Did your reviewer feel you did a solid job addressing your purpose in the personal essay?
• Did you effectively reach your audience? Why, or why not?
• Discussion 2

Post your original paragraphs and your final, revised paragraphs in the discussion. Be sure to label them accordingly. Then, in 200 to 300 words, describe your Grammarly experience. Address the following areas:

• Identify the top three issues Grammarly uncovered in your work (e.g. wordiness, passive voice, subject-verb agreement). 
• Were any of those issues surprising?
• Share some of the feedback Grammarly provided as explanations.
• What did you learn? Was it helpful?
• Describe the usefulness of the Grammarly tool.
• Did your writing improve?
• Will you use Grammarly to help you proofread your entire paper? Why or why not?
• Will you use Grammarly for your future class assignments? Why or why not?
• Share any remaining proofreading questions or concerns.