Need Thesis, also need Outline fixed

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I have included the original paper + thesis example + outline needed.

Need to be completed by 23:50 CST today (03/15/2015)

Instructors response to my paper:

"I have real concerns about this paper.

First, this is not an outline; it's a rough draft. Starting with an outline will help us see where your thinking is solid and where it needs refining.

The paper has decent organization, but there's no attempt at a thesis statement and you're allowing summarization of textbook concepts to substitute for analysis and application of those concepts as relates to your chosen subject. Large sections of the paper don't relate back to the chosen subject of ARROW. I don't see any research. Make sure I'm seeing research and how you're connecting back to the course material.

Minus 5 points for one day late.

Please see attached outline with embedded comments.

A strong thesis is clearly stated.	10
Outline supports the thesis in terms of approach to the analysis of the topic and shows how they will approach the six perspectives.	20
Outline is logically organized.	25
Outline shows how research supports the analysis.	15

INSTRUCTIONS --------------

Last week you selected a topic and began conducting research for your Media Analysis Project. Now it is time to use that research to formalize your thesis and create an outline for you paper. If you put in a good effort here, the act of actually writing the paper will be much easier.

Even though this paper is an analysis using a specific approach, it needs to have a thesis. This thesis should frame the way you choose to approach the six perspectives. Click the link below for an example.

Your outline should show the key points you will bring up in the paper. You will want to start to integrate your research in support for your key points. You can use the example outline linked below as a guide."