Need paper proof read and corrected to teachers notes

Also, need another couple pages added. The paper attatched. References must be added in APA format.

Due by TOMORROW AFTERNOON / LATE AFTERNOON (central time)

ASSIGNMENT: Your course project is to research and write a 5-7 page analytical research paper about how one health care organization or company of your choice measures the effectiveness and results of their health care and how they use this data to implement quality improvement. The use of three research sources is required, and additional resources are strongly encouraged.

Teachers notes:

I think you have a good start on the rough draft or final draft for Metro dental care.  I think what is missing is some specifics of their data, if you are unable to find specifics on data, metrics and results make sure you use appropriate resources and references to discuss some of their metrics in more detail.  In addition, make sure for the final paper to also discuss how they continuously improve their effectiveness and results.  Remember that the length of the paper must be 5-7 pages for the body of the paper yours is only 3.5.  Also, remember to proofread, check grammar, use the same formatting and font throughout, and in text citation.