need essay for english course

Please read the essay i post first and evaluation the essay according to these criteria. 

Please write about 300 words.  

please on time and do good job!!

i will attach artical in this web! please read first!And please read Criteria for Evaluation and evaluation the essay according to these criteria

this is esl course. you have to write a essay like student study in language center

Criteria for Evaluation

Author  - does the author have the credibility to deliver the message.

A. Claims

      (1) What is the author’s main claim (thesis)? Is it clearly stated fairly early in the essay?Does the thesis reflect the purpose of the essay?

(2) What are his subsidiary claims (minor points) or the claims that he uses to support his main claim?

Are they clear and valid? Are they related to the main claim?

B. Evidence

      (1) What kind of evidence does the author use? (e.g., facts, statistics, examples, personalexperience, expert testimony, analogy, etc.)

      (2) Is the evidence sufficient, specific, relevant, and convincing?     

C. Audience

      (1) What kind of audience does the author address? Is it general, specific, academic, etc.?  What are his assumptions of the audience?

      (2) Does he effectively address the audience? Does he close the gaps between you, asaudience, and himself, as writer?

D. Tone

      (1) What is the author’s tone or voice? How does he seem to feel about the topic? Is it academic, persuasive, informal, sarcastic, informative, optimistic, etc.?

      (2) How do you know? What context clues, word choice, or emphasis reveals this tone to  you? How does it contribute to the argument?

E. Organization

      (1) How is the text organized? Does the author use attention getters/hooks, headings, subheadings, counterargument, rebuttal, graphs, questions, conclusions, etc.?

      (2) Is the organization effective? Is it logical, chronological, confusing, creative, etc.?

F. Do they present an opposing point of view?