MY Draft (3) - that need re-structure.

I have my Draft ( 3 ) paper that need some adjusment. Since its draft (3) then it shoudnt take that long.

I have posted the prompt and the things that you have to mention in the attachement, moreover, its numbered from the right as what should u start reading.

Just heads up foucs on number ( 3 ) Structuring your first essay and the WPA outline.

not to forget, I also attached my draft 3 ( with teacher nots ) number ( 6) in the attachment. and the draft 3 essay that need structure number (7) 

to sum up, just do as what the (3) (Structuring your first essay) point exactly, and the WPA outline should make everything easy.