modify the reshersh

I have english reshersh just I want person modify it according to my teacher comment and format. I want it in short time just 3 houre 

this is my research paper about how we can protect our children from cyber crime

Attachments:

1-the paper in picture my research after my teacher modify and with my teacher comment

also i take picture for rubric 

2-ms word file is my research paper after I try to modify according my teacher comment I want you to modify in this copy also i I wrote some comment to you 

3-pdf file is APA format follow it in modify 

4-ms word file is guidline or Paper Format also follow it when modify 

you can find the resource in last paper Exception one resource yuo can find it here