I choose to wright about “We Real Cool” by Gwendolyn Brooks. I believe that the theme stands out. The “breaking from the establishment” (Brooks, G 1983) as Miss Brooks said. The theme is repeated in each line telling the reader how cool it is to be different. There are three poetic devices that are used throughout this poem. The rhythm is there but different for some people. With the very short sentences and the use of “We” at the end of every line gives the poem an emphasis on the word. Repetition is also used on every line. Again “We” is used as well as the repetitive theme. There is very little fluff. On top of that, she was able to rhyme with significance, on each line. All three elements were put together well and with very little word usage. The simplicity of “We Real Cool”, allows the reader to reread the poem over and over while changing the rhythm as they read. She used two words on each line to make her point. Thin gin, left school and sing sin quickly describes how these pool players were different. The pool hall, I believe also has a significance. “The Golden Shovel” is a name that might mean digging for gold or finding gold or money at the end of a shovel. Reading this poem was a bit different than hearing Gwendolyn Brooks read it. I read it in a less than emphasized way than how she performed it. I say performed because that’s well I felt she did. Her emphasis on “We” sounded so good that I wish I could recreate it. The pauses after each “We” were different than I would have done. To get the full meaning and feel of a poem, for me reading it aloud is necessary. It is like watching a silent movie and then watching one with sound. You walk away with different feelings about each. Brooks, G. (1983, May 3). We real cool [Audio file]. Retrieved from http://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/we-real-cool |