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Part II: Describing Revision

Before turning in your final version, it is important that you work on revising your writing.  Remember that this includes proofreading and organization.  After you have done that, write a couple of paragraphs in which you describe what you did to revise your essay.  What did you change about it?  How did you try to clarify ideas?  Did you spend a lot of time proofreading?  What did you find to be most valuable about the revision process?