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This is the note from my professor

 

Hello Ellia,

a few things here,
- make sure you single space; this spacing looks off
you can match the format as such http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/653/2/
- therefore, remove my name, as it's going to another student, not me
- the tone is a bit off, remember the intent is to give your advice to a new peer; this sounds very technical
- you want to open with a friendly tone, something that doesn't go right into "revising a paper"
-  remember, one paragraph/ one topic


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