I have an pout point ready just i need to fix it l have some comment from a teacher

the comments from a teacher;

  Please reread for any spelling or grammar errors or just typing errors. For example on slide 3 you have sstudent instead of student.

Can you add in some examples of his work or things in his stylie of work? On the last slide you say he wore a silk knotted about neck, can you show that or the patched clothing?

Make it clear with a final slide what his contribution was. His influence on _________ remains today because _________. Or His name contributed to the art community by coming up with ___________________