I did my essay already, but my prof doesn't like it need fix and change etc this is what my prof...

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I did my essay already, but my prof doesn't like it need fix and change etc

this is what my prof said:
 
"It is too late to do much. You have had eight weeks to consider the topic and to assemble arguments. A quick read of your draft indicates that, for the most part, you have not centered on how Levi and Poitier were able to survive the extreme discrimination each encountered, that you have not set out examples from the texts of the strategies they utilized, compared and contrasted them sufficiently, etc. This should be the exclusive focus of the essay, not the literary merits of Poitier, etc and other copy taken from book reviews and so on.
 
I have some parts were copied from book review, need to re-write or etc
    • 9 years ago
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