Hi friends I have argument essay need some correction

Hi friends I have argument essay need some correct there are some comment from the professor and 2 commeent for classmate. so I need you to fix this by reading the instruction and the comment 

The reading I will give you ,it does not have page number so you need to put quotes and I will put the page number because I have the book

this is the reading if you need it

https://www.rc.umd.edu/editions/frankenstein/1831v1/intro

 The requirements it's attech so you have to read the requirements and than look at the article  also my profosser give me the thesis statement  which is ("How I, then a young girl, came to think of, and to dilate upon, so very hideous an idea?" )

body paragraph (A) (Hours given me for recreation, was to write stories)      

body paragraph (B) (Ghost stories)      

This from the profosser you will find it in the reading