Freedom of Speech- Revision

Thank you for your essay. You provide a clear claim in the introduction of your essay, and I like how you compare and contrast the positive and negative aspects of the first amendment. However, that is how this paper read. It was more of a compare and contrast paper than a persuasive piece. When revising, be sure to take the body of the essay and break it down into three or more pieces of evidence to directly support the claim. You can still use the same information; it is simply a matter of refocusing it toward the claim. If you need help with this, please let me know.