fix whole essay (change the tone)

I had a complete essay, it have to be change all the tones. Because my professor found out the essay was buying from the internet. so please use the current essay what I bought from the internet and the essay what i wrote by myself to make an other new essay. Also please follow the instruction to rewrite the esssay. ( "essay_5" is the one i bought from the internet, "essay2_final" is what I wrote before) 

If you have any miss understanding, please let me know.