essay needs some changes
I will attatch my essay and two references.
This is the comment from my prof on the essay:
Your paper looks pretty good! Things to work on: the thesis statement--what is the overall point you want to make about the poem?
conclusion--don't just restate what you have already said. Try to answer the question, "Why does this matter?" in that last paragraph
body paragraphs--these look good. They could use additional support from the poem (maybe one more quotation in each body paragraph)
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