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 Essay needs to be improved with more and deeper research, better bibliography and Idea support.

I need least 5 or 6 other online sources with footnotes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

paper needs to be improved on 5th body paragraph, which im passionate about. needs humor too!

Its too formal for my style...

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