An Essay describe an interesting experience

Topic:

An Essay describe an interesting experience

( I had been Orlando Disney first time when I was in US first year. Before I had been Disney, it was my dream……)

This is the beginning of the essay. Please continue to finish that.

Requirement:

Seven paragraphs!!

1. Thesis statement.

2. An outline in time chunks and separate form the essay provides an overview of the essay.

3. The essay organization directly relates to the moments in the outline.

4. The opening captures the reader’s attention.

5. The writing includes significant details to pique the reader’s imagination.

6. Effective active verb choices bring the essay to life for the reader.

7. The essay clearly explains what was learned or why it was important.

8. Verb tenses are used consistently.