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 This is my  first essay should be correct to:

 

·         crammar and punctucation.

·         Idea Development.

·         Clarity of ideas.

·         Strength of introduction and conclusion

 

 

 

My Mather

            As prophet Mohammed said," Heaven is underneath mothers feet". A mother is a person's whole the world. My mom shows me she loves me by taking care of me, having a special kind of love, and providing happiness.

            The first way that she demonstrates her love for me is by take care. For example, she cares for my children in Saudi Arabia. Also, she calls me every day to check on me. Moreover my mom send me money for rent and cast study.

            The second thing is the love a mother has. All of the people like to have love but when they get it from their mothers, it is a really different love. For instance, when a person's mother cooks for him, that food is really special because the food is made with a mother's love. Also, a mother's love is like medicine because my mother cares for a child when she is sick. She stays awake to be reassured the child gets better.

             Additionally, a mother provides a child happiness. If a child is sad, she canes to him to kind with him to make him happy. If he does not see her, he may feel bad. However, when the child sees his mother, he is so happy. When he talks with his mother or sits with her, he feels safe. A mother always knows what her child is feeling when sees the child or when she just looks in to his eyes because she has a sense for feeling how her children feel.

 

            In conclusion, my mother has a very positive effect on my life. Actually, my mother should be distinguishes and respected in the world.

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