English homework

No.3 file is teacher gave me the comment for this paper.

Please correct those mistakes, but some I already corrected.

You only need help me to add long quotes or short quotes in essay base on what did you quotes from the book. You need one of each. You also need 3 “They Say, I Say” statements.

See the No.3 first and use No.1(They Say, I Say” statements)  and No.2 (Scoresheet)

I hope you can understand, and it is due in 6 hours or less