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Hey Zeek one the first essay apparently i did wrong im going to copy paste what she told me that i did wrong

 

Hi Mo,
I just read your essay, and I think maybe you misunderstood the assignment. For the homework assignments, I wanted you to read and summarize This I Believe essays. However, for the essay you were supposed to write about your own belief. The topic was limited to beliefs about education. I am attaching the assignment sheet. Please email me the essay when you finish it. Also, please let me know if you need any help.

on this one can you fix what ever she wants lol.. and i am going to post what she wanted on the third essay you just finished for me its correct but she wants more details i will also copy paste what she wants there as well.

Hey Mo,

You need to do some rewriting. You have just summarized the movie. Instead, you need to examine different elements of the movie, like the acting, screenplay, cinematography, etc. Also, you never revised the This I Believe essay. (Essay 1). You told a story about someone (Mr. Talal). Instead, you meed to write about one of your beliefs. Read the other students' essays on the discussion board and also read the sample essays I have posted. Right now, I can't give you a passing grade on Essay 1 or Essay 3 because they aren't on the correct topic. Please get them to me. I want you to pass.

 

**This last one posted is an example of an essay i had to peer review which that person is assigned to me, im posting it just incase if it helps in any way.

 

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