english, compare and contrast essay

hello everyone, i have to write an essay point by point, compare and contrast. my topic is the defferences and similarities between highschools and colleges.

essay must be 2 pages, written in 3rd person, Solidethesis statement, develpment(topic and controlling idea)

transtion use( words and phrase) used connect idea.

please write the difference and similrities between highschools and colleges.

this is my finla draft, please of you dont want to write a good paper, dont send me hand shake, i want to get at least 90%. This is my final, so please you must write a good paper, what i am willing to pay is only 10%, if i got i good grade, i will give a 5$ gift. last thing, please dont make the essay too hard, make it eassy as elementary school. thanks