edit for my essay

i have done wrote my essay and i recieved some comment from my professor and i want you to fix it or make it for me, also the professor gave me an instructor paper to help me write this essay , you can find it in the attachment file please read it.


the comment i have received

1. work in sources throughtout. ( for whole essay )

2. your sources must be worked into your mean points and not seperated out ( that comment in the second page from the third paragraph to the fifth)

3. clearly state what you are arguing. ( in the third page the first paragraph)