DUE TONIGHT AT 10:00

Respond to at least two of your classmates. Respond to one classmate who used a different revision technique than you did and one who used a similar revision technique. In each response:

• Compare the resources and techniques you used for revision to those your classmate used.
• Make one concrete suggestion about how the revision sample can be further improved. Please do not comment on grammar or stylistics—just content.

Response posts must be 125 to 200 words in length and posted by Day 7. If you have questions about how to participate in discussions, consult “About Discussions” under the Course Home menu. You are not required to support your claims with additional scholarly sources; however, should you decide to use additional sources, make sure you properly cite any references. Refer to the Ashford Writing Center’s Citation and Reference Guide for guidelines on citing sources in APA style.