correct my essay grammatically and sentence structures

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  I  need help in some point in my essay 

1/ grammatically 

2/ sentence structures ( my teacher told my I have many FRG  and RUN-ON sentences 

3/ their is some () in the end of some sentences which include my notce to add 

4/ witer the coclusion as what i mention inside my essay and IN ORDER

5/ add these vocabulary {approach - contand - detect - dynamic - ephemeral - equip - examine - expose - facilitate - get into trouble - identify - learn the hard way - maintain }

6/ witer works cited in the end and check my intext cited using MLA STYLE 

 

the IMPORTENT thing is ( BE IN SAME LEVEL OF MY WRITING) i do not want excellent witing , i wanna correct writing because { MY TEACHER VERY INTELLEGENT } i do not want him figer it out \

 

 

 

due in**** 6 hours**** 

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