Can you rewrite an essay about my papa's walts and those winter sundays.

Can you rewrite an essay about childhood using my papa's walts and those winter sundays.

There is professor's comments, so you should follow it.

Comments: Far less pharsphrasing, much more quoting.

Part of this assigmnment's requirements if to demonstrate a good knowledge of literary terms through the analysis of the literary figures in the poem. It's hard to evaluate that when there if so little quotation happening in the paper

 this is an revision essay so keep the basic form.