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I have H.W. essay about Division-Classification Essay the topic is (Strategies to quit smoking).

Criteria for Evaluation: 100 points

30 points: Development

1. Has clear introduction and thesis statement. 
2. Follows clear organizational pattern
3. Has appropriate title in the correct placement
4. Type of audience is considered
5. Tone is appropriate for the topic
6. Topic is supported fully
7. Has clear transitions from point and paragraph to point and paragraph
8. Style of conclusion is both suited to the topic and logical without adding new information
9. Stays on topic and does not veer off in unnecessary directions

35 points: Grammar

1. Has no comma splices
2. Has no run-ons or fragments
3. Uses correct pronoun agreement
4. Uses varied sentence structure
5. Spelling is carefully checked
6. Word choice is clear and appropriate
7. There is no faulty subject or verb agreement
8. All sentences are parallel
9. Commas and apostrophes are used correctly
10. Underlining, italics, capital letters, etc. are correct

35 points: Proper Use of MLA

1. Spacing is correct; without extra spaces used unnecessarily (2.0)
2. Proper information is listed at the top and left (Name, Class, Assignment Type/#, Date)
3. Name and page #’s are at the top right ½ inch from the top
4. In-text citations are correct and in the right place
5. Is the correct length with the correct number of sources
6. The Works Cited page has the proper format and correct heading
7. Information is properly credited to sources
8. Has proper margins and fonts