Business writing

• •Rewrite the following message as an appropriate email/memo. 

Hi – 

This new territory is a pain in the butt.  Lots of stops, and no sales.  Ughhh!!!! People out here resistant to change!  GR.  They could get hit by a boulder and still not do anything different.  Giant companies ought to be up on current market changes, don’t ya think?  Will sub reports asap as long as you care to rec.

Long story short, market is down.  No news = bad news.

-me