Autobiography paper final draft modification

In the picture 001, you need add a paragraph after the second and talk about the teacher had enlightenment me and let me had confidence and power about English writing. In the 002 you need add a paragraph as my teacher mentioned, and I also need mentioned I helped my father's company, the report I did in the company was let me had a exercise and I do not have salary. The employee in my father's company was like my friends and teacher, they all had big helps for my. In the picture 003, you need write a new paragraph in the end and answer the questions in the last paragraph.