Assignment for kim woods ( fix the order order_26126_64445.docx)

You have selected an important industry in vehicle manufacturing for your sustainability analysis, and are quite focused in answering the set questions of this assignment using analysis of the Altona site. A few suggestions for you:

You should consider adding more depth in your analysis in the section of Altona site’s sustainability challenges and solutions. Perhaps, you could provide a little more evidence of research (background study of this site on its sustainability activities). Do take full advantage of the maximum words count allowed (up to +/- 10 % more), and ensure that you have met all the primary requirements of the assignment. Create a report that is well-structured (easy to follow). I would also suggest include (selectively) a couple of relevant photo, diagram, flowchart, tables, or figures (as you see appropriate).

In a nutshell, a competent piece of work is one that is highly focused and well structured. You should be able to attain a B+ or A grade for your efforts.