argument essay

Your Writer's Memo should:

       Demonstrate Critical Thinking about the role of audience in shaping your argument

       Name your audience & their values

       Explain how the specific evidence that you picked applies to your audience

         Should be at least 200-250 words

       Should walk me through your paper and demonstrate that you made purposeful choices

       Explain the strengths of your paper

       Explain what you would change to improve the paper

so that will be in 1 paper.

and I want you to do rebuttal for parahraph 9 and 10, and please rewrite the title at least 5 words.